Author’s Note: I wrote
this piece for a personal narrative. I focused on my conclusion and my body paragraphs. This is about a bad memory that happened
to me last summer in Kansas for a soccer tournament.
Learning a lesson is usually not enjoyable. Especially if it
has something to do with a vital object that you use every day. This item is my
phone. It was probably the most un-smart thing I will ever do in my life. I
learned a lesson about my phone when I was almost 575 miles away from my
hometown, Pewaukee.
Retelling miserable memories can sometimes be heartbreaking
but my mine isn’t too sad, just frustrating. After playing a game of
Impractical Jokers with my soccer team throughout the hotel, we decided to go
swimming in the pool and hot tub. “Splash!” as soon as we walk into the pool
outside we see a girl constantly doing bell flops! While watching it, it felt
like glass shattering on the floor but on my stomach. It was interesting the
first five times, but after that she was definitely doing it just for
attention. After she was finally done we decided to hop in the pool for a
while. Our team played a game called “Tee” in the deeper end of the pool but it
got sort of boring after a while. I decided to get out of the pool because I
was getting cold. Since I had nothing else to do, I played with my hotel key
and phone. I placed the card between the keyboard and screen and start to slide
my phone from keyboard to just the screen. After about ten slides I noticed a
little black piece of paper with wires in it sticking out of the phone. I tried
to turn on the phone but it was too late, my phone’s screen wouldn’t turn
on and it was broken.
There were many negatives about my phone breaking, the worst
was that I had to send it all the way to Texas just to get it fixed. Not to
mention it took them three weeks just to fix the screen. Worst of all I didn’t
have my phone for an overnight soccer camp in Madison, and a one week vacation with my family to The
Big Apple and Washington D.C. Just to add to the negative list, my card also
wouldn’t have worked because it was near my phone. Hotel keys never work when
they are near electronic devices like phones and iPods. I learned to never mess
with my phone when I am at least 500 miles away from home.
There were only two positive things about breaking my phone
to go along with a bunch of negatives. First of all, they fixed it to make it
work again. Another one of the positives was that I got a new screen because it
wouldn’t work before. Plus, the screen was cracked before it started to not
work so I got a normal screen put on the phone. There were close to none for
good things about breaking my phone.
In conclusion, breaking my phone was horrible. I couldn’t
contact friends or if I got lost in New York City, I wouldn’t be able to find
my family unless I told the police. I also wouldn’t be able to call my parents
if I was somewhere and needed to contact my parents. At least I got my phone
fixed and almost as good as new. This was not a great memory that I will remember
for a long time. I learned to never play with my phone away from home ever
again!
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